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Tornado Ghost  [13+]
Writer's Cramp Entry 2/16/20
by ♥Hooves♥
Review of Tornado Ghost  
Review by Angus
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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Konnichiwa, tHiNg, and happy belated 19th *Shock2* ‘birthday’ on here!
I loves me a good ghost story, especially when they’re true, and I can totally relate to this!* I have no doubt that that was your father standing there in the background of that picture!
You did a great job of telling this; that short bit of history helped to set up the focal point with the picture. What’s more is that your Aunt’s belief in religion and those who had gone before her would protect her from the tornado was perfect!
I was also impressed that it brought you and aunts closer and that you believe your dad’s watching over you all the time.
One tiny niggle in otherwise excellent true story:
‘a figure that looked so much like (a) my father's profile’
Otherwise, BRAVO!
*My own true story: My mother passed away when I was just 11 years old, but 6 months later I saw a bright light appear in my bedroom one night. It didn’t scare me at all because I was sure it was my mother’s spirit. I said “Mom?” and the light grew brighter for a few seconds and then slowly faded away.
To this day I can tell when my mother’s around because I break out in goose bumps, even in hot weather! Whenever this happens I always look up and say, “Hi, Mom. I love you.”
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! Thanks for sharing this, stay safe and healthy, NEVER stop believing, and may you have many more wonderful ‘birthdays’ on WdC!


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