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Review #4577426
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The Little Red Engine Who Would  [E]
My Councellor inspired me to believe I could end my addiction. Her words became this poem.
by Dr Gonzo
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am reviewing your work as a PDG member of DWG "disABILITY WRITERS GROUP" 


Description:
My Counselor inspired me to believe I could end my addiction. Her words became this poem. I like stories of inspiration.
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Your word picture showed courage and determination.

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What and why:
The positive afirmation and encouragement you received for your counsler. You believed what your counsler told you.

plot:
Overcoming addiction and facing the temptations to return because of stress or other life issues and prevailing.

Theme: underlying meaning/message
If you believe you can't you won't. If you believe you can you will.

Rhythm/pace:
reading your poem was smooth and i was able to focus on the story.

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Writer's Purpose

feelings
The feeling of hope that everything works out ok.

Conflict:more/less
The challenge of beating addiction.

CHARACTERS
Addiction versus human is believable to me because I've read about this and have experienced withdrawal symptoms because of pharmaceuticals.

Believability
This is believable because I've heard similar stories about varied situations.

         *Question* QUESTION(S) *Question*
not now
         *InfoV* SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: *InfoV*
Keep focusing on victory.

My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you:
         
Very nicely written.

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My thoughts and Impressions:
Thank you for sharing, allowing me to read and review for you.
Write on!
Safe travels and many blessings.

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