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 What Was God Thinking?  [13+]
A poem about the person i am in love with
by DreamAngel7159
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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This is a poem with a specific structure that effectively describes the narrator's wonderment about someone they fondly admire and feel gifted to have in their life. It specifically sets up to describe this heralded person's attributes in a pleasing way that shows complete appreciation. The first two stanzas constructed with the opening line that sets up a brief list of attributes.

The third and final stanza is used as proper summation and a reveal with an answer to these questions that seems appropriate. As it is a poem that speaks directly to its other, the one that it is deeply fond of, it's like a gift to give back. These constructed words of appreciation break through that dimension of writing to actually sharing the writing for another sat upon that pedestal.

Well crafted and well done. It has a raw element to it for its down to earth tone, not trying to sound overly poetic or artsy. It is simple, honest and true to the nature of the writer who shares these feelings openly with a reading audience, like myself to judge and review for quality. It is among the more common approaches to writing an ode known to many and can be appreciated by novices everywhere.

Brian

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