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 Down But Not Out  [E]
Every day is a fight, sobriety, those who don't want me to win, just to use as they do.
by Dr Gonzo
Review of Down But Not Out  
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I like this poem. It captures the heart of a fighter in the moments before losing a fight he cannot win. It has good rhyme and rhythm. I can't really find fault in it. I am left wondering if by some miracle he has managed to win the fight or if he ultimately falls in defeat.

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