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Review #4582440
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 The Run  [E]
Motivation and imagination
by wanderingoff
Review of The Run  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi I'm MARY ANN MCPHEDRAN thank you for sharing with me
First impression: J loved the suspence and the description of the tral ln each verse of the poem.
INTREST, The descripted verse kept my interest all through the poem, and I was excited to see how the poem ended.
Prefference I liked the last line' I didn't panick but came close to it.'
Spelling No errors.
Changes. No need to suggest any changes.
Overall Impression: A well written poem with good imagery and word description and entertaining I enjoyed reading your poem. a job wel done.
This review ls written by MARY ANN MCPHEDRAN, and reviewers group DISBILITY WRITING.



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