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 Mr. Chronos (Death)  [E]
Mr. Chronos keeps the time.
by Shaara
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about everybody's least favorite subject: death. Most people do not want to die but it comes for all of us sooner or later. I have never had to preach a funeral yet but I am sure the day is coming when I will be called on to do so. In the meantime, this poem says, we all continue to hate death.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you didn't glorify death because there really is nothing glorious about it.

What I liked least: If anything, the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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