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 Morning Light  [E]
Similarities between the trip the sun makes with that of life.
by cosmicgypsy
Review of Morning Light  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I came by your port on the Space Blog Prompt today because it is your account anniversary and I wanted to give you a review. After all, Space Blog was designed to get you reviews. So was Anniversary Reviews Forum.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about waking up in the morning and giving thanks for being alive. As a preacher and chaplain, I can appreciate a poem like this. It is God who wakes us every morning to view his world anew.


Your spelling and grammar: Looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that it was rhymed. It flowed well.

What I liked least: I would have preferred to see it in more traditional stanzas.

Thank you for writing. Space blog will return!

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