I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a writer's poem. It expresses a deep desire to write and a great inability to do so. I think every writer has been there! It's very frustrating and you describe that frustration well. Personifying or anthropomorphizing the pen was a good idea!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the anthropomorphized pen.

What I liked least: The format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse.

This review is also sent in for Anniversary Reviews Forum to celebrate your account anniversary. Congratulations!



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