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 Dinner Plans Have Been Changed  [ASR]
A planned restaurant date is transformed in a role reversal
by Nermeltheone
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is an epic poem about a woman putting a businessman and an apparently arrogant one in his place. I have often heard my grandfather say that it was a woman's prerogative to change her mind. You made that clear to your date. Good for you!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I love it when a woman puts a pushy man in his place.

What I liked least: the format. I thought it would work better as a short story.

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