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 Wishing for Turkey  [E]
The Dialogue 500 - November 2020
by QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Interesting take on the prompt. I like that they both got what they wanted. Does he really need the wishbone? He seems to have gotten the meal he wished for? The jump between scenes was a little jarring for me but given what it is, a dialog 500 entry there wasn't much you could do about that. I like it.
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