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 The Visitors  [E]
Ghostly Incident
by Ourkidd
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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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It is an interesting story of the paranormal. There are a few minor flaws, one in the first paragraph you typed wee when I believe you meant were. In the second paragraph you say it is 1974 when in the first paragraph you said 1975 you said the second paragraph happened after the first. Not major flaws, probably typo's but they did lessen my attachment to your story.
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