Hello sindbad },

I am reviewing your poem as a random read and review exercise.
It is my pleasure to review your piece today "Think outside the Box" and to give
you helpful information if needed.

Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are
only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest,
for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "Think outside the box" really caught my attention. It is apt and suitable.

Rhythm & Flow:

I found the rhythm and flow very easy to follow and engaging. The emotions from each line are very vivid and clear.

Imagery & Emotions:

I love how this poem talks about the daily issues in India. Yes! These problems rightly exist but no one dares to speak up on this topic. It's a daring poem. I appreciate.

Mistakes:

My personal opinion is that there are no mistakes. The poem is superb. Though, I want to suggest you to write a note at the end telling what the words 'halaal' and 'maal' means. It's just a suggestion.

My favorite stanza is:

"Sing softly to the One ,
offer prayers and incense ,
Keep it silent and strong ,
or quiet and intense."

Overall Review:
The overall poem is fabulous. You have made good efforts in showcasing the Indian issues like people screaming on loudspeakers and spitting on roads. I can truly understand different set of problems we encounter here. Your skill will surely provide you more success.
Good luck for the contest.

Keep Writing!
Regards,
Lurie Park



"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .