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 The Passport  [E]
What would you do if you lost the one thing you needed to get home?
by AliceLvs2Write
Review of The Passport  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi and thank you for sharing your story with me.
First; I found the story to be well and you kept is emy interest. the story is exciting, which you displayed all through the story.
Spelling I found no spelling errors, but advise you reproof, I may have missed some.
Changes: No need.
Overall: A well written story with good display and interest all through the story. Well done.
Reviewed by MARY Ann MCPhedran

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