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 Mystical Branded Love  [13+]
Two immortal souls left their old life to find it anew by love and the dangers it reveals.
by R.Bralue
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Welcome! I stumbled upon this through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a very cute story!

Formatting tip: when writing on the internet, add a blank line between paragraphs. It's standard practice and easier on the eyes. Indentation is used in books for economy of paper, but since paper is not an issue on the internet, we use an extra line.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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