First Thoughts: The poem follows the free verse form and looks good on the page. The first stanza establishes the speaker, mood, theme, and subject of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of fun and joy forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: The last line in the last stanza is my favorite, because of the internal rhyme on well and tell.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because it made tennis sound like a fun game.
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