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My Heart - My First Poem Ever  [E]
This is the foundation of my career as a poet. Heartbreak emotion needed this release.
by Jay O'Toole
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A pleasant hour, teacher Jay O'Toole *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This piece hooked me when I've visited your portfolio, I am curious especially the word foundation in the brief description. Foundation as a poet- which Ive concluded that this is one of your first poem.
The scribbled words in the body is simple, but I like the blending of words that expresses a good imagery like heart, rocket,heart, exuberance, shatters in infinite pieces, and put in the pocket. It's simple but it's sweet. Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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