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A pleasant hour, ruwth MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSIONI'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. and I'm here to give you a review as part of the celebration for WDC Festivity with the following message: Haappy WDC Festivity! Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste. I always loved to read the letters and gospel of Apostle John about our Lord Jesus Christ, on how he look and know Him. It is in deed express in his letters about a relationship with the Lord, that is why I've concluded that John is the closest apostle of the Lord. And I do like how you show it here, enlightened it here on your piece on the Gospel that John wrote. The lines and the happenings are in order, other than it flows naturally and not forceful. And it compacted with emotions, it is like the personality of John that reflects in the Gospel in the Bible is here in this piece. Absolutely beautiful. Well Done! MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION : I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it. I am looking forward to read more of your works again. Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. Please visit my recognized WDC Celebrity Authors Portfolio this Month and Newbies Picked featured in "Welcome to my Garden of Creativity " - Jeannie Cheering for Martel & Anni Pon
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