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Review #4626930
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 Renewed Spirit  [ASR]
A poetic story, Life after death, Sum of lifes worth
by ~VAL♥sBaby♥Dylan~
Review of Renewed Spirit  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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As I read your poem the feelings of peace and calmness surround me as if to give me a hug. You chose words that showed me, like watching a move, the events. I could feel the emotions and relate to the events because God has shown me how to go through life in a calm and peaceful manner. Recently i have considered and pondered the transition from this earth to my heavenly home. Scripture is something I ponder frequently. You brought to life many aspects of what scripture reveals in a way that allows the reader to emerge themselves into the poetry story. This can be a great way for someone to find some of the things of God and perhaps explore further other things in scripture.

Reading your poem was easy and I was able to smoothly move from one stanza to the next. My focus on your words and following the story was not disturbed by issues with the mechanics or word misplacements/wrong choices for the lack of any other way to express this idea.

Your word art is a wonderful picture of trust in God and scripture.
I'm very glad you wrote it and are sharing it with WDC members.

Safe travels and many blessings.


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