Hi
Ironworker

This is a nice and interesting story nicely connected to the past and reincarnation as well. I find it very difficult to connect and blend the past events to the present times due to change to times and so many complications that needs minute handling. The balance and effortless foray of past thoughts and articles with present day conflicts and understanding was very clear in this story. I am sure you must have got the deserved recognition in the contest..sindbad

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