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Review #4627534
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Ode to Spring  [E]
I so love nature… Why doesn’t she love me? (Humor Form: Quatrains)
by 🌕 HuntersMoon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Review by WakeUpAndLive


Hi 🌕 HuntersMoon ,

I found this gem in the Read & Review Section. Although Summer is almost gone and we didn't have much of a Spring here in the Netherlands I had to review your ode to Spring.

Funny how you describe the aches of an allergy to pollen. I bet it is a burden on many every single year. To start this poem with a sneeze is hilarious!

The five quatrains have all their unique flow. Rhyme and rhythm are pleasant to the ears. I only experienced a hiccup in the last two sentences.

The description of Nature and its jewels are very much to my taste.
I loved reading it and it was a joy to review.

This little poem made my day. As always you capture the essence of your topic to a tee. Bravo!

Keep on writing (and reacting on Newsfeed). You always manage to make me smile.


WakeUpAndLive️~🚬🚭2024



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