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 The Dreams (Not finished)  [E]
A story I started working on, but I wasn't sure if it was good or not. Would like feedback
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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
HeartStyle

This is a nice and rather heavy story on Grace Serket. I did feel the inner questions and clarification Grace seeks and all this and more buffer has been amply provided by you with a great mystery about what power Grace has as she turns 16, and what are the dangers. All this and more answers will remain immensely awaited..sindbad



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