Hello Marvelous Friend ,

This is the review of your Rising Stars September task, "Vignettes" .

General Comments:
While I did enjoy reading this piece, it's going to be hard for me to review this based on the actual lesson.

Technical Stuff:
A vignette is a short and descriptive piece of writing that captures a brief period in time. Vignettes are more focused on vivid imagery and meaning rather than plot. Vignettes can be stand-alone, but they are more commonly part of a larger narrative, such as vignettes found in novels or collections of short stories.

What you wrote is not a scene in the story-telling sense. This is good and I enjoyed reading it though.

Conclusion:
I have rated this 5 stars based on effort and content. But it did not meet the task requirements.

Not to worry though, this lesson will still be marked as completed.

Thank you!

Kindest Regards, Lilli

***Disclaimer***
The comments herein are just my humble opinions. Use whatever is useful; discard the rest. I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. When I read and review, I am reading as a 'reader', to be entertained. You know your work better than anyone else! If I make a suggestion or a comment, it is meant in the spirit of 'helping' and I welcome the same when people review my work.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .