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 Responsible Rebellion  [13+]
Daily Flash Fiction Challenge entry. Prompt: Include the words shell, door, bed.
by Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi
Jeff

This is a nice and refreshing story within 300 words and the kind of advice is perfect and sane. The timings and all were perfect and Taylor did learn a lesson, on a thin line seperating between trust and breaking the same. All this setting an example has been one of the focal point of this story. Nice and wonderful read..sindbad

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