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My Heart - My First Poem Ever  [E]
This is the foundation of my career as a poet. Heartbreak emotion needed this release.
by Jay O'Toole
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
Jay O'Toole

This first poem of your is rocking and innocent. As a reader l liked those innocent moments with mathematical precision like heart shatters into infinite pieces and the effort to collect the pieces, or heart like a rocket or losing the exuberance. Overall the poem can be appreciated more if we take the era 1973-74 into consideration..sindbad

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