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 A whispering sun for my mourning self!  [E]
Into feelings and librettos
by shivpoetesspriya
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
shivpoetesspriya

This is a nice and creative piece and l failed to get the Sun. Overall the desire to see what is inside and the deep voice at the begining makes this a interesting poem. The primal emotion and it's unanswered voice can have more creative outburst and rhapsodical state is indeed creative..sindbad

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