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 Mommy, I'm Home  [18+]
written for Dialogue 500
by ⭐Princette♥PengthuluWrites
Review of Mommy, I'm Home  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi
⭐Princette♥Pengthulu

This is nice short and rather scary short story. Though l remained mystefied with Molly taking her mother's life and at that moment hee father comes and asked a malignant question. I felt the cupcakes and all rather sudden and new as well. Such change in scenario has been written with flawless perfection..sindbad

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