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 Final Vows  [E]
How one reads the words; perceptions brought forth: Surrender is a choice-nothing more.
by fyn
Review of Final Vows  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
Fyn

Final vows and the mindset one has is beautifully captured here. The way you have expressed the threadbare nature and all the basic things here and beyond, in a simple and mundane manner. The way you have stripped your mind, intellect and ego for the final vows. This serious commitment and creating new universe in your mind did leave a beautiful synopsis of your mindset. The ending as none did feel like a massive chip of function of nature in your mind.. sindbad

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