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Heads Up  [E]
A man finds a lucky penny.
by Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk
Review of Heads Up  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
Jeff

This is a nice and interesting story though difficult to believe. As a reader l did enjoy the way you expressed the detailed misfortune. It was funny and creative as well . The last part not the least hitting your would be wife and an invitation to a new beginning all this with lucky penny my ass, did leave a deep impression.. sindbad

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