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 UNPACKING  [13+]
This was a poem of actual events written in response to a prompt about unpacking.
by SandraLynn Team Florent!
Review of UNPACKING  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi
SandraLynn

This is a nice and interesting introduction here with something burning and no one nearby. The way the scene and climax cane into being gives lot of credence to your creativity. Danielle was able to maim herself making tea was the perfect ending to this short and sudden unpacking.. sindbad

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