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Hanukkah  [ASR]
Monkey's Hanukkah poem
by Merry Mumsy
Review of Hanukkah  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi
TopsyTurvyMumsy

This is a nice and catchy piece on Hanukkah, l liked the way you used this word in a balanced and effective manner throughout the poetry. Just the background music and orchestra was missing. Overall a impressive and dashing piece with a catchy ending on do not forget on what you have been told... sindbad

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