Hello there, Bubblegum Jones ,

I love Halloween! So, thank you for posting on the Newsfeed that you made some Halloween-themed additions to your collection!

This was a fun read and filled with some interesting facts that some people may not be aware of! This was well written and very entertaining. I also love that you added a cute pumpkin image as the cover!


Suggestions:

Halloween trunk-or-treat program at an area church which are growing in popularity,
Replace are (underlined above) with is.

What ever way they choose...
Whatever is one word.

...slowly evolved into an candy-giving event for children.
This should be a candy giving, not an. Use an before a word that starts with a vowel.

Plenty of witches turn out every year for the world’s largest Halloween parade which is held annually in New York City.
A comma is needed after the word parade.

At one time in Ireland Jack O’ Lanterns use to be made out of rutabagas, potatoes, turnips and beets.
A comma is needed after Ireland because that is the ending of the introductory phrase. Also change use to used to be.

Jack O’ Lanterns
Jack-o'-Lanterns (with hyphens) is another way to write this.


Closing Comments:

It's never too early to start celebrating Halloween, is it? Wishing you a frightful season with lots of treats!


Thank you for sharing your work.


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