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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, Bubblegum Jones ,

Yay! A Halloween-themed poem! This is a super cute poem. Great job with the rhymes - that's always a struggle for me, but you nailed it.


*Flowerb* Suggestions:

Have you considered changing the font color to a holiday-themed scheme? Maybe make it bold and add some orange and purple? Just a suggestion to make it a tad more festive.


*Flowerb* Closing Comments:

Once again, you have adorned your work with a cute cover image!
Happy Halloween!


Thank you for sharing your work.


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