Hello there, Bubblegum Jones ,

You have been bust with all this fun Halloween writing! This is a great piece and makes me wish I had purchased some Halloween candy while I was out running errands this morning!


Suggestions:

In several places, you wrote "all of the". In each instance, it can be changed to "all the".

...and decorations months in advance to this holiday when the weather is still hot and sticky.
Should be 'in advance of this holiday', not to.

On the eve of every Halloween...
This is the beginning of the second paragraph. A comma is needed after Halloween because this is a prepositional phrase.

Over the years...
A comma is needed after years because this is an introductory phrase.

Closing Comments:

Great job! Keep writing!


Thank you for sharing your work.


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