Hello Rhymer Reisen ,

This is the review of your Rising Stars September task, "Writing Poetry" .

General Comments:
Haiku:
Technically you pulled this off perfectly! The syllable counts are on-point and this is definitely 'nature' related. I know this is about tornadoes (based on our email exchange) but, it reminded me of hurricanes - particularly the last three lines.

Your use of the word evisceration was an interesting choice, to be sure.

Acrostic:
Great job with this, as well. Good descriptions. This felt very personal and I especially liked the return to personal power at the end.

Cinquain:
Clearly, you understood the assignment! Well done and perfectly executed!


Conclusion:
You did a wonderful job with this assignment and I enjoyed reading your poems.

Kindest Regards, Lilli

***Disclaimer***
The comments herein are just my humble opinions. Use whatever is useful; discard the rest. I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. When I read and review, I am reading as a 'reader', to be entertained. You know your work better than anyone else! If I make a suggestion or a comment, it is meant in the spirit of 'helping' and I welcome the same when people review my work.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .