Hello Aneska,

This is the review of your Rising Stars September task, "Writing Poetry" .

General Comments:

Haiku:
I haven't heard the term 'Indian Summer' in years! It brought back memories, to be sure. Your poem followed the form guidelines; syllable count is perfect and the topic is about nature.

Acrostic:
I loved your word choice - RISING STARS! The content of the poem very nicely reflects back to the phrase. I enjoyed the images and phrases you incorporated.

Cinquain:
You executed the form properly. With the first reading, I didn't quite get the connection. After I read it again, slowly and deliberately, I enjoyed it a lot.

Conclusion:

You're doing a wonderful job!

Kindest Regards, Lilli

***Disclaimer***
The comments herein are just my humble opinions. Use whatever is useful; discard the rest. I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. When I read and review, I am reading as a 'reader', to be entertained. You know your work better than anyone else! If I make a suggestion or a comment, it is meant in the spirit of 'helping' and I welcome the same when people review my work.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .