Hello LorenIsOneOfMyNames,

This is the review of your Rising Stars September task, "Writing Poetry" .

General Comments:

Haiku:
Great job with this one. Nicely executed and has lovely images.

Acrostic:
A very timely poem and I love the phrase you selected, We Remember. This poem is emotional and gives the reader pause. Well done!

Cinquain:
I like the topic you chose here! The only problem I saw was that the first line is supposed to have two syllables, not one. May I recommend changing 'kids' to "youngsters'?

Conclusion:
Great job, overall and I enjoyed reading all the poems. Keep writing.

Kindest Regards, Lilli

***Disclaimer***
The comments herein are just my humble opinions. Use whatever is useful; discard the rest. I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. When I read and review, I am reading as a 'reader', to be entertained. You know your work better than anyone else! If I make a suggestion or a comment, it is meant in the spirit of 'helping' and I welcome the same when people review my work.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .