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 Father  [ASR]
A memoir for a giant of a person
by sindbad
Review of Father  
Review by Beholden
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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A very beautiful story and I'm sure everyone who reads it will, like me, wish you the best through this difficult time. You had a father who was a real gem and you are who you are thanks to him. Remember the good times.

As to your writing, I am presuming that English is not your first language and, if I am correct in that, you have an astoundingly good grasp of it. In fact, you write better in it than far too many of those whose first language it is. I particularly like the way you do not load your words with too much weight of flowery description and unnecessary asides. Your style is very story-driven and you are not easily distracted into irrelevant side alleys. The history of your father and yourself is told accurately and without flourish. This allows the reader to share in your experiences, rather than being instructed in how they ought to feel. The piece is very moving as a result.

Well done and thank you for sharing these treasured experiences.


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