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 Wendy the Witch  [E]
This little witch has a small problem. Hope she has learned her lesson.
by Dorianne
Review of Wendy the Witch  
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, Dorianne , I'm Prosperous Snow Valentine , I am review "Wendy the Witch because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, plot, and characters of the poem, The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, and move the plot forward at a good pace. The characters build the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I suggest writing a children's story based on this poem.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because of the rhyme on sticks and tricks.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem-story because of the main character.

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