First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, plot, and characters of the poem, The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, and move the plot forward at a good pace. The characters build the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I suggest writing a children's story based on this poem.
My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because of the rhyme on sticks and tricks.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem-story because of the main character.
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