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 The Wall  [E]
Facing the loss of a friend
by TK
Review of The Wall  
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, TK , I'm Prosperous Snow Valentine , I am review "The Wall because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, speaker, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of friendship forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it suggests that the friends will be together again on the other side of the wall.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the theme of friendship lasting forever.

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