Hi, 𝔹𝕝𝕦𝕖𝕪𝕖𝕫 , I'm Prosperous Snow Valentine , I am review "Invalid Item" because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog" First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooks the reader with things tumbling out of the closet. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while reminiscing about the items found in the closet. Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My favorite part: The last paragraph is my favorite, because putting everything back in the sewing box sounds like something I would do. Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this essay because of the subject. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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