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Hi, 𝔹𝕝𝕦𝕖𝕪𝕖𝕫 , I'm Prosperous Snow Valentine , I am review "Invalid Item because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooks the reader with things tumbling out of the closet. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while reminiscing about the items found in the closet.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last paragraph is my favorite, because putting everything back in the sewing box sounds like something I would do.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this essay because of the subject.

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