Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am review {item:} because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog" .

First Thoughts: The poem follows the free verse for and looks good on the page. The rhythm is smooth and tranquil, and moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite, because it emphasizes the spiritual emotions of tranquility and peace.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0, because of the way it shows the spiritual emotions.




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .