Hi, Ray Scrivener , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am review "Ghosted"  because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog" .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, speaker, and mood of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and sorrowful emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I suggest placing some end punctuation in the first stanza, similar to the punctuation in the rest of the stanzas.

My favorite part: These are my favorite lines. I like these lines because the state a truth about making ourselves feel worthless.


Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because of the way it expressed the emotion of sorrow.




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .