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Review #4636864
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 The Edge of the Road  [ASR]
If only life were this simple and easy to read...
by Sophy
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi, Sophy , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am review "The Edge of the Road because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog.

First Thoughts: The poem follows the free verse form and looks good on the pace. The rhythm is smooth and flows easily from line to line, which makes this poem easy to read aloud.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite verse, leaving the imprint. I like this verse because everyone should leave an imprint on the road of life.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because it make me think about what imprint I am going to leave on the road of life.

Made by Lilli



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