Hi, Rhymer Reisen , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am review "Invalid Item"  because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog" .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, plot, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poem's plot, and gives the reader something to think about concerning history.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of its thought provoking comment about history.




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .