Hi, roseleewrites, I'm Prosperous Snow Valentine , I am review "Invalid Item" because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog" . First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of hope forward at a good pace. Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My favorite part: The last line is my favorite, because it reveals a hopeful outlook for the future. Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and inspirational poem a 5.0, because it left me with a feeling of hope. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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