Hi, Willowraven72 , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am review "Lost In My Head"  because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog" .

First Thoughts: The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the poem's plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last two lines are my favorite because the climax the poem's plot with hope.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because it shows what stress can do to an individual. It also shows that the person can overcome the stress.




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .