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 Review #4641916 |
  Happy New Year Leah! I am here with a review to celebrate you.   I was drawn to your title and the tag line quote. Very deep! I am happy to have found this and enjoyed reading this original short reflection. The idea about space in the bones is brilliant. The expression is heart felt and makes an impact as I relate on some level to the message.  The question you set off by itself is like a lonely query echoing through space. And I can sense a frustration and a confusion about why folks do not get you. I liked lines like the alliterative "descry the derangement" and the pleading voice, as well as the deal about letting the other be the sun. The questioning about being too much evokes a pondering. Maybe we are meant to the sun and the other can be an equal sun. The last line is potent and so relevant. I believe we are not meant to be smaller... but to raise our consciousness and live who we really could be. Finding soul mates and friends of like knowing is the challenge. It is interesting contrast to the line about making the other "the sun". I appreciate this evocative expression, which also refers to finding a love that understands and will allow one to be oneself! It is a deep desire, I think of many.  Thanks for sharing your unique voice.  Keep on writing on!eyestar  
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You responded to this review 01/03/2022 @ 12:09am EST