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Christmas Feast  [E]
This year, we'll have an unconventional feast. Written for {item:2172116}
by Sum1
Review of Christmas Feast  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Sun*Greetings Sum1 . I am happy to celebrate You with a review on behalf of "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]" .


*Flowerr* Yum! Your Epulaeryu poem describes a delightful Christmas meal with an obvious joyful enthusiastic tone. Well done.

*Butterflyo* You did a superb job using the required emoticons too. I think it is a challenge to find some to use for specific meals. LOL You even managed to get the syllable count using the emoticons. *Thumbsup*

*Candycorn*I liked the variety of foods you would have for your feast. The picture is appealing. It was fun to read and it is cool how you added some rhyme to assist the flow. Adding words like Yum, My oh My shows the emotion about the food, which is an element of the form. Maybe add a comma after "cabbage". *Wink*

*Star* Thanks for sharing your vision and craft. I had fun imagining this meal.

Write on in your style!
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