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 Two brothers (Working Title)  [13+]
Billy has extraordinary powers but wants nothing to do with a super life anymore
by jonoprecel
Review by KnightScribe
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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         This puts a smile on my face. From the start, there is a rich sense of history in the characters. The descriptions in this story are an absolute master class in show.
         Now, it is labelled as a novel and the full story isn't here, but it doesn't even end at a chapter point. Or at least that it isn't how I would have ended. I remember back to when I first started reviewing; I use to say very often that I just wanted more for the reason I wasn't giving full stars. This time I feel justified. I was ready to lose a night of sleep until it ended.
Deus Vult Gratia,
KS

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