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Rated: E | (4.0)
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The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.


Overview:
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Title:
          Purely Coincidental is a great choice of title. It's captivating to the readers and one would surely take a read at your piece to discover what coincidence the writer encountered. Great job on providing a quick description.


Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
          There is a shift of emotion in this piece. At first, the character was so sad, lonely because of losing her lover three years ago. She went on an adventure with a rented car, to Africa in particular. She was in-love by then but still haven't moved on. And so, she took a trek to hopefully find her junk box hero, Mark. And she believed that things will be okay.


Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:
          Free verse. No set meter and rhyme.


Artistic Voice and Imagery:
          Imagery is clear. It is clearly visible to my mind the scenes that took place in this poem. Great one!.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
          None detected.


Favorite Lines:
None.


Suggestions:
          None.


Final Thought:
          It's a good piece about one's life's experience. It's nice to read pieces like this - hopeful and inspirational. Pieces that talks about the experiences of others which offers bits of lessons for readers to relate with. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing.


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GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen



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